Very very good poem indeed! :) 5/5

interestingly close to my life i wish lives were daydreams great job

It's nice to escape life and daydream! But it's always back to reality! Great poem. Keep posting I would like to read more of your work! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

This a great poem! It reminded me of myself. Keep writing :D 5/5

This is true, no one really knows what is importatn until they lose it. Good observation. Keep up the good work.

wow... great poem... I really enjoyed reading it:)

Great poem! 5.0