hey great poem! i really like it
blessings courtie

wow. that was a very interesting story...excellently written... the twist at the end was brilliant. didnt see it coming. a very heart felt poem. good job. keep it up xx

Was this true did it happen to someone you know god bless you

I dont even have words to describe your talent its awesome

I love it, the last line was great, very nice way to end it

Deep..i'm speechless..yet again..no compliment can describe your poetry..

amazing..beautiful..my favourite

-angel-

This poem floored me. Oh. my. goodness! You are such an amazing writer. I was pulled in and then just stopped. It was kind of like a punch in the gut. You got that point across with elegance. WONDERFUL WRITING!

5/5. Wow. You sure got an imagination. And its very good at writing poems! Great Job!!.

Wow