The idea is great, I heard about the person attacked someone with a sharpener, hope you're alright as you can be :) Keep it up xxx

its good!!

Hey this was awesome! and i dont know what your talking about saying that your bad at writing, i thought this was awesome, as well as the rest of your poems, there all awesome! your one of my favorites on this entire site! so awesome job! keep it up!
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xX-Katherine-Xx

well lets not say the word awesome to much now.....

HAPPPPPY BIRRTHDDAYY!!!!! :-D> I remembered!!!! hehe!!

YAYAY!!!! Don't forget to change youur pf you silly goose!! lol.

I dont think this is bad at all. I think the last part ruins it a bit though. "Who would have thought that a pencil case could be so dangerous?" It's a bit long for a ending sequence. Very nice poem :)
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