beautiful song indeed...it has got many penetrative lines that can just touch the readers heart...beautifully done...take care and keep smiling..FIVE>>>

yea! aww thanks! :D

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5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

thanks amit..again.lol

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Wow! That would make a beautiful song! The words you used well they were just perfect, I can really relate and wow.. its just fab! Keep it up xxx

You are good keep writing

you are very well at these lyrics, nicely done! Blessings to you

With love,
Heather

thanks sooo much! :D

Great job. i love

thanks <3

thanks soo much! :D <3

thanks so much! :D <3

Oh....this is so sad..... but it's a good song!! :-P

thanks u! :D

this is really really good.

thanks! :D

this is mad good but i was wonderin is this supposed to be a love or sad poem.

both..lol