Nice job hun very true!! and i tihnk alot of girls can really relate to that because i think everyone does atleast one point of their life keep writting 5/5 xoxo -Rachel

Nice job hun very true!! and i tihnk alot of girls can really relate to that because i think everyone does atleast one point of their life keep writting 5/5 xoxo -Rachel

Man, you know this is SO true! Well, as others have said. But yeah! The dept of this poem it great. Love the poem. :)

True, Heather. Once again a beautiful poem.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

the heart is the most beautiful feature of every walking person

Yep so true, but you are pretty anyway (well in ya pic!) Great poem
love ya Sammi

heather, this is beautiful! i loved the last thing you said; "My father is God, He only creates beauty". it's so true! that's really clever, and i love that! you're awesome, heather. if only there were more people like you in the world! love ya, heather!
*Zac*

ya it's sad to see what some girls do to be "Pretty" it ruins thier life! great poem, *claps*

~lil slam~ PLP

honestly it was pretty good. i don't know if it was your best stuff heather. Probably cause i was Imging you all the time. I am sure that you can do much better then this. I know that you can do things.

Very nice quote at the end, really liked it.

Love ya,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior

It's a great one..I liked it!

Thanks for all your comments and voting

Chris

Hey hun
Amazing poem..Very meaningful! Great writting..Keep it up!
Shannon

Beautiful Heather.... It is true...We see it everyday...Very nice write!!! And as always it will be a five if it lets me rate....hunbun's computer is a little screwy.....lol

My sweet Heather, you truly said it all and so much truth. Why society is like this I don't know. I always want the people I know to have a loving and caring heart like you. Then you have all the beauty in the world. Well written and great job. love ya bunches, hugs, *Ann*

I'm pretty sure a lot of girls can relate to this.
Great writing!

wow...amazing poem!!

"My father is God, He only creates beauty."

that quote is wonderful, i love it. it really does make you think about all of the youth in the world and what they think about themselves. another great write!!

Very powerful message...Holly

Beautiful! I agree with you on that one! 5!