I know i'm starting to sound like a tape recorder but this was another beautiful poem! I love how you spoke bout him and then flipped it and spoke about the voice anyway it reminds me of how I feel and bout a similar poem i wrote! And NOOOO it's NOT sh!t!
Love
Tash

Nice poem, it's not bad. It's very nicely writte. Keep writing.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

This poem is really good and is not that way think...Some strong feelings abt love and the pain induced by love...beautiful poem...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

THAT iS A REAALLLY SUPER GOOD POEM! GOOD JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

That was really good Keep writing and everything will get better!!!!!!!!! Heather

thank you for the comment, i apologize for the sterotype i may of created with my poem, i don't believe all people who commit suicide are selfish but i would believe 90% of them to be....if you need further explanation i'll give it to you lol but each to his own right!
well wonderful poem, and oh, jus wanted to say theres nothing wrong with taking chances, you find a whole new world ........in yourself.......

With love,
Heather

your poem is really good i no how u feel i feel that way bout my ex yeah love sucks sometimes but that speacil person will come jus b patient k please try and rate some of my poems thaks bye take care.ASHLEY ARELLANO

aww, i know the feeling lol, this poem is really good, you can really understand what your feeling in it, i loved it
5/5