i like! i love the whole idea with the water, and drowning... and... whatnot.. very nice!

Ahhh! You continue to be a poetic genius...Although, I would never ever let you sink! Fantastic, mon amie... I loved it! And I love you!
Car

That was really good!! Great Job!
Katie

dannngg boy! lol. Another poetic masterpiece. Your poems never fail to impress me. Your poems keep getting darker and darker though Zac. What's wrong? Stop living in the darkness and talk to me. I'm here all of the time practically!! Leave me a message and I'll get back to you. I love reading these sad, long, dark poems, but I can't ever seem to get it into my head that YOU, my cheery un poco chico, wrote these!! Its not how I always thought of you, so its coming to me as a shock, just hang in there Zac!! *hugs* I hope you're okay.

Love you to bits and pieces, so don't you dare go back to cutting or I'll....I'll....find something...to do, lol. Just don't go back to it, ok? OK! lol!

~Sierra

~*~wow that was a good poem, keep up the good writing~*~

i only write like this to get feelings out. i'm done cutting, but i'm trying to get every last piece of me that wants to cut away, and i do that through writing. this poem reflects how i felt in the past, so dont worry. lov ya!
*Zac*

...oh gosh.
Incredible vocabulary. It left me stunned.