Barely a Sunset

by Carlee Ann   Mar 21, 2005


When I first laid eyes upon you
I knew you were someone I'd never forget
I'd never felt love so true
It had been barely a minute

I met you and saw your soul
Our connection held so much power
It was more feeling than I'd ever known
Barely an hour

I fell in love with your smile
I didn't have words to say
How being with you made life worthwhile
Barely a day.

I couldn't help but feel
The love, I had never felt so right
It was almost, so close to being surreal
Barely a night.

And now I know, without a doubt
That you are my greatest bet
Now I know love, what it is all about
Barely a sunset.

**Car**

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Thanks!

  • 19 years ago

    by eternal rest

    gorgeous.... absolutely gorgeous....

    kelly

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Thjanx Dora!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    ty, Katie!
    *Car*

  • Wow...that was totally AWESOME!!!!! grate job darlin'!! That was one flippin hot poem. It has the be the hottest thing since a mechanical toothbrush!!
    lylas,
    katie