Star

by Bjorn   Mar 21, 2005


I discoverd a star
this star can outshine all the other stars
it can fill my heart with pleasure
it can make me smile
every night i wait for this star because when this star shines it can make ice melt it's my light in the darkest night.
You know that all this is true because the star is you

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  • 20 years ago

    by Amit

    Well, thanks for your comments and votes friend, bring some more :) your writings are expressive! God bless you. Write on and be happy :) May God showers all his blessings on you!

    Amit

  • 20 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!!!
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit
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