WOW... im literally speachless... that is really really good... im kinda the same... how do you make your poems so good and so long... i wish i could write like you... pfft id like to see that day... yea ok GREAT poem keep writing cya
slaMBit

oh........................my.............................god.

ohhh......................my!!!.................GOD!! Zac that was incredible, incredible!!!!!!!!! So sad and omg!!! The flow was intense and amazing, I LOVED IT!!!!!

I'm still stunned. I'd hate to think its a true story, but I think it is.

~Sierra

that was great. i hope your ok. great job
~cort~

I totally agree with Sierra. That was...AWESOME!!! *jumps up and down doing victory dance* Great job dude!!! love ya,
Katie

thats really astonishing. incredibly sad, but so good. Hold on, you only have 5 more days... if i can do it, you can too.

I missed you last night, moshing would have been so much better if you were there too! ; )

Love ya!
Kelly

Omg, hon, I thought you were over the top with creative genius last night, but I didn't even know! This is just... remarkable. Sixteen days down, hon... We all love you sooooo much, so hang in there. I'm proud of you!
*Car*

well everyone else already said it...great poem zac..i love it. keep it up n keep on resisting the temptaion! lol

love ya,
*jen-jen*

Always waiting for a comment....I'm almost always here to respond right back to you!! So when you come, just leave me a message really fast and I'll respond!!

This is FREAKIN AMAZING!!! OMG!! you are SUCH an incredilbe writer!!! its insane how much i can relate to this poem....WOW GREAT JOB!! Keep it up
Love always
Sammy

ty sammy!

this is one of the best poems that i have ever read and i can so relate..? did u ever cut? just wondering... read mine there called my ife and my only friend plz

Ahhhhhhhhh!!

What a tragic story!!!!! How...scary in itself. -shivers-
ohhhhhh. my. i hve goosebumps.