wow Amanda, I love this poem, I turely do!!! It's so well written....Funny some of my poems are also from when I was 16 and 14 and I was thinking the same thing as you"can't believe I felt like this too, back then"...It's a bit scarry isn't it??? I'm sorry to say, that I havn't got your email=0( otherwise I would have written you back!!! Please try again, I would love talking to you.....*hugs*

Very good poem even if it is sad. I give you a five.
Take care,
Rachelxx

I liked this alot this alot and for starters it was quite good. The structure was a bit choppy but the message is well done. I wrote one called Turn Around I think you would really like tell me what you think

very well written poem, the one part i didn't really like was the first two lines "Trees are green and so is grass,
I'm surely gonna kick Ur ass," but overall i really liked it!

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)