A good one.
I love it.
Keep on writing, and
believing.
Okies.cookies.
;)

Another amazing poem I can't say much more but keep writing u were born with the gift to write!

I must admit, when I saw that you were new, I wasn't expecting a good poem... but I am glad that I was wrong.
This poem is lovely, written with captivating words, metaphotic symbols and all-around beauty. I loved the sense of a bitter world to it, and a sad ending.
Well done, I will check out your other poem now.

"I cannot longer make it work, tonight I say goodbye"

- "I can no longer make it work ..." ? Just a suggestion to make it easier to read.

The context of the poem was good - Well thought out and expressive. Nice work.

^^Kalah.

Great poem! I loved it ...its so real and I can relate to it so well.

"If tomorrow I´m not here, no one would mind." That is the line I like the best because it fits me. I like this one alot because alot of the readers can relate to it and .. i don't know I really like it alot. 5/5

much love
savannah

wow!!! this was really great!! this is my favorite of yours.. keep it up!! :)

Wow! great one...
Keep it up.

Le marquis

That was so great...touching and meaningful... best wishes
Doreen. 5/5

Great poem. The last two lines were awesome. I give you a five.
Take care,
Rachelxx