wow!! amazing poem! i felt like i was actually there at the scene while i was reading...excellent write, you are very talented!!

The poem was good, I liked the way you described the scene, but I also agree with aprill bigelow... it is sometimes extremely hard to feel miserable and to know that there's no one to listen to you and maybe help you... but I also agree that suicide is not the answer.
Check out my poem "Suicide consequences"
and vote and comment it would mean alot, thx.
Keep up the good work!

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

not bad. great message
~*Freak*~