Well written poem, Andrea. Full of sadness and emotions. Well done. Glad to see you're posted another one. Take Care, hugs, lol, *Ann*

So sad. Excellent poem. 5/5.
Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Woah that is so good, I like the slight repeatition, very sad but beautifully written, keep it up xxx

Don't get me wrong, your poems are absolutely wonderful, you're intelligent and have a lot of great ideas but this one just wasn't your best although I did like it......Awe, I wish you could write some happier stuff but first you need to feel it! ((hugs))

With Love,
Heather

beautifully written...very strong and emotional... love it!!! i expecially love when you said
"The days go by as a slow blur.
An awful game that never ends.
But I do not want to be left to play."
really beautiful. can't wait to read more!
-xXx-

Wow, i really like how you created this poem. It's very unique. Thanks for commenting on so many of my poems. I really appreciate it:)
-A

a very unique poem...loved the way you started off your each stanza...beautifully done...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

If you ever want to talk you can PM me. Great Poem 5/5.

And here it is. A great idea on the word use, again the subject matter only makes my empathy greater, but your talent grows with it.

The only gripe I have at all is the use of silent-ness, which I thought should definitely have been silence, but the structure dictates the use of ness and so I think this is a case where we can allow for some poet license!

Another impressive piece.

B

wow, awesome job! i really loved it, ur an awesome poet, and i can see that the only reason i havn't discovered your poems is because they're under the "dark" part and i can't say i go there very often, but i will wander there allt he time now..just to read yours, they're really good~ keep ti up and thanx for the comment on my poem, it means a lot~
*Brittany*

Always worth waiting for, your poems are fantastic. Well done. good work

Hey good poem

Really good poem Andrea! I'm not surprised it's really good though, all of your poems are really good! I WUV AND MISS YOU! <3

~Krissy

*hugs*

P.S. Pweez e-mail soon if you get the chance. I miss you x100000000

great poem! i love it! i'm glad i've read these! this is really beautiful! dark and compelling! keep it up!

-Big Hairy Monkey Nuts!!!

Love, Taylor

Brilliant poem, Andrea, brilliant poem - I am still clapping!

that was really good andrea. keep it up. wonderful job with this one.
luv
nida

You are just wonderful at writing poems. Keep up the good work!!