Excellent poem, Heather. Beautiful Lines, and creative write. Keep writing. Last paragraph is very beautiful.

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

Love, Amit

i like it a lot...beautiful writing. i love metaphorical poems, they are so full of meaning and time. it's kind of funny when i start writing a happy poem, it just ends out really sad. i dont know why it does. oh well, maybe one day when i am happy the poem will end that way too.

*hugs*

Great poem, Heather. hugs, lol, *Ann*

that's unique. but it's still good. great job.

Very short and sweet! Great job as always~Holly

good one, looking forwards to any of your future poems! PLP

~lil slam~ lots of hugs~

grl i so agree with this poem. true love does take time to grow. True dat/... luv ya Britbrat

This is an extraordinary poem. Very well written. I loved it. 5 for this one, definitely. I can't wait to read a few more!

Eden