Comments : The day I died

  • 19 years ago

    by Donna

    THANK YOU . I REALLY APPRECIATE YOU COMMENTING. I WILL COMMENT ON YOU POEMS.LOL

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Awh girleh, This is wonderfully written and described. People could help out alot more than they do. Take care aye :D This is a very good poem. -clicks you onto her favs-

    <3
    ^^Kal.

  • 19 years ago

    by Donna

    Thank guys your awesome I really appreciate your comments

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I love it...though it's very sad, but something I can relate to!!! Again very powerful.....Just remember that you are not alone...

    *Hugs Sabrna*

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Job well done. This poem caught my interest the most when you ask thouse questions like..

    "So why didn't you help me
    why didn't you cry
    why weren't you here
    when ever I died"

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Aw, that was so sad! thats so horrible. im so sorry.... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow ! amazing ! touching ! and i feel the same way too... your a talented poet im adding you to my favourites !
    :-) u got 5/5
    i think this poem is dark & deep & lonely
    i loved it !
    god bless
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Eraklis

    Another great piece of work. But you need to remember that its not always about bieng happy all the time its just about bieng.