WOW, beautiful poem. I have no idea what Killer of time is talking about when he says this poem isn't 'deserving' of the award, it certainly is not the best poem ever written, but it is power, worded beautifully and has a dark lot of symbolism.
I really admire the disjointed sound of this piece.
"Every thought thun’k, thun’k alone." I loved this line.
Well done!

I like it. It has a very deep meaning in it. >3jess

This was well worth the award. Great job. loved the style and flow.

take care

it was good
but u can improve it by making the sentences shoter.

but besides that it was a good peom
so im giving u a 4

lilbro

spectacular

i love it, it pays to do things new... this peice is wonderful. and there is nothing you could do to make it better... so talinted, you have amazing skill...

I'm only 12 and i thought it was pretty freakin' awsome!

gr8 poem well done! wud apreciate if u comment and rate some of mine too :)

Keep writin ur great!

Tc Rob x

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thats ace and pretty deep ace work

It is very different and unique! Keep it up. it's mezmerizing and hypnotic! i love it

Amazing!! Great job!! Keep it up! xox

-Jessica

This is a very good poem! I like the way it sounds and flows together. plz read/comment on some of my poems and tell me what you think.

sarahs got a point u are a truly great writer. mine is nothing to what urs is. but i think i do ok. but mayby you could give me some pointers. im sorry if mine isnt as well decripted as bobs or as flatering but i just want u to know u are truly awesome :)

-faithfulserenity

cool

so different and unique... its such a beautiful and strong emotive poem, i love it !! 5/5 keep it up Abbie x <3

Good work, brilliant