hey, that is reali touchin, n i like the way its all pieced to gether!!!

5 owta 5

xoxobambam

Wow such a great poem very well written. U have such a talent to write keep it up! Check out some of mine if u would please Thanx and Take Care!

This poem reminds me of something- I am not sure what. But it does...
Another beautifully written poem, though very short. You could ad onto it, or make a part two for it, maybe in a more story way instead of raw emotions.
But definetely toys with ones feelings.
Well done!

i really like this poem.... i thought it was great!! nicely written keep it up!!

touching and inspiring in a way.... very sad though...keep writing, -5
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