First & Last

Before you came along I felt empty and alone
Completely hated in this world
So I looked for a friend high and low instead love, the greatest tresure I found
Life seems more worthwhile to live now that you're around
I hope we never grow apart
Just remember you will always occupy that on special place in my heart
I don't have much to offer you
All I have is my complete and sincere love
Know that my heart is in your possession
At first I was scared I'd be facing rejection
I still can't beleive you feel the same way...
Even so, from so many girls I wonder... why me?
I know I'm lucky to have you right by me...
You have showed me a love I've never felt before
And because of your promise, I love you forever more
Now it's my turn to promise, I promise you that:
My love for you is always there
No matter what I will always care
My love for you is deeper than any ocean
For you are the one to whom I give all my devotion
My love for you is higher than the sky
For you are the sparkle in my eye
My love for you is infinite
For you are the one I was destined to meet
If I could get my way
I'd be with you night and day
Whispering those three words I love to say
This promise I will seal
Maybe than you'll know it's for real
I just love everything about you
I don't know what I would do if I ever lost you...
Right now I'd hold you tight
With you the whole world seems right
So no matter what people do or say
I will always be by your side and forever stay
I will never go away, no matter what
For you I'd give my life willingly just know:
I will love you for all eternity

(Please rate, I want to prove to her that her poem is good and sweet!)