very sad but still great poem!

wow that was reali aswum, it was reali sad , i was getn those sad tingly feelins coz it nearli made me cri

5outa5
xox bambam

I wanna cry and thanks for the comment waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

nice one!~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

In Love Amit

Tragic loss-closure is difficult to convey
but it seems you have done it here
emotionally but mature.

how terribly sad....my dear, I hope this is not true, and if it is I am terribly sorry....regardless it was a great poem....so much feeling 5/5 I think I'm adding you to my favourites....I'm glad I checked out your stuff.....

Kalika

Now that was exellent the power of it was great the wording was good and the follow up was sublime. You paintied me an image I could not only see but feel that is what a exellent writer can do GREAT JOB!!!

OMG!! is that a true story??

This was great im guessing its a story but if its true im sorry bt this was good i loved the last two lines they were wonderful