wonderful poem!!

al you continue to astound me with your poems...i miss you more than words can say...

Yet again another wonderfully written poem.

xxx Luffuuls yew -
;;^^Kal.

So bluntly said and so sadly true. this is a beautiful write -5
thanx for your comment!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Excellent poem. Deep and true. I love it. You have a natural talent. 5/5

this is a very simple but very well written and touching poem. good stuff.

Outstanding notion for a poem, good word choice and rarely for this place...not boring or predictable. The flow could do with some tidying up because the syllable count seems a little off in places.

But apart from that. Bold effort.