aww good job! keep it up! 5/5

much love
savannah

so sad, keep writing and expressing your feelings its great therapy...
my cousin is in a wheelchair and she writes.. she once told me.. my pen is what moves me forward not my legs,
well done 5/5 for the sadness and feeling
Doreen

wow very sad....great write though, expresses lots of emotions. -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

wow this was reeeli powerful i loved it. i sensed anger and hope too, with the hole wing bit. loved it keep it up xxxxx

great poem!!

one more comment...you are a girl "contributing" to this life..with your great poetry...keep up the good work
hugs
Doreen

Hey it's very sad! Deep, emotinal and just great! :)