I liked it and i thought it flowed well, it was moving and deep and i hope that loser gets what he deserves and you were to good for him!!!
Tash
xoxox

wow, that was great. it sounded so sad too... 5/5 great poem! thanks for commenting on mine, too

wow this is really good
thanxz 4 commenting on mines

Lauren

very nice poem! It's sad though but shows you are strong..

Whoever this is for doesn't deserve you! You go girl! hehe! Anyway great poem. Liked the rhyming alot. :)

Great feelings. the anger realy comes through.

Good message and there is alot of emotion packed into it...the flow/rythym of it isn't consistent. That would be my only suggestion to make it better. Good job.

Thare are bits and pieces of good writing here but it's so choppy and it hard to really get into it if your going to rythm let it flow if not just write I hope I am making some sense here

I really like you style and I like your confessional ability. Check out the few Ive written if you would. What do you think?

awesome emotion.....Im glad you ended it