Awww.....arent you an undiscovered talent! .... I cant remember the title but this reminds me of an old song my mom listens too, of course, its different in language but it has the same meaning, very nicely written, the only suggestions I would have for you is shorten some sentences up a bit but thats no problem....and oh, I loved the way you captilized certain words to bring more attention to them, thats creative! keep in touch with me and i will have no problem giving opinions and whatnot, I like what I see thus far! 5

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<3--Shauns Forever--<3

Been there too-the forgetting it was His
turn that is! Nice work-enjoyed and put
a smile on my face!

Wonderful!! I loved the poem very much! Thanks for commenting on mine! Your poem was written really well! Man it gave me a picture in my head that even stressed me out a bit (although I have never been in that situation)!! Wonderful! Bravo! Keep it up! ^_^ V ~Kady~

Becky, Great poem!!! Very true...no matter how crazy the day may get, it's still a good day.
Thank you for the encouraging words and the comment on my poem, I do appreciate it.
Take care and God bless you!1
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Wow! This poem was so cute!! First and foremost I would like to say thank you so very much for the comment you gave me..It brought me to tears..but this poem..this poem was just..WHOA! I felt that way mostly because I could relate a lot! I find that happens to me and you're right..when things settle down ...somehow it is a good day...You are very talented as you say! This peice was incredible and put a smile on my face! 5/5
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

One amazing work of poetry..I loved this poem and have loved almost all of your poems that I have read.You are amazing and I should also thank you for your comments on my poems.I appreciate your talent and respect your experiences.Keep in touch.Jeff

A really good poem. :o)... my mom goes threw that kinda stuff... You have a gift keep it up.

*Heather

Not bad... not bad. I like the ending. A straight forward moral of "pressing onward." Some of your rhyming was obviously forced though. Not horrible, but it was still noticeable.

wonderful! wonderful!..absolutely beautiful written...very deep meaning inside, keep writing, and thanks for the beautiful comment on my work, much appreciated! take care.

love freedom,
clouds.~

Amazing poem! you know i wish more people could see that just because so many things go wrong doesnt mean that the day is ruined. thank you so much for commenting on my poem. and i hope to read more of yours soon!
Let God always bring joy and laughter
into your life.
thankyou, Godbless you my friend,
erica*

This surely sums up some of my days, never having enough time. But Thank God, it still is a good day. Beautiful poem, Becky, great job. hugs, love, *Ann*

Great poem! The flow is flawless and your outlook great! I loved the chaos you portrayed...and you wrapped it up quite well! I look forward to reading more~Holly

I loved the humor,,,,excellent write
5/5

I love it!!

Terrific write. I love your style. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up:)

excellent choice of words. It was really really really perfect. love, Marjan

you're really so talented.

Wow, you really are an upbeat person, aren't you? Your optimism is infectious.

Thanks again for your comment on my poem. I have many online, most aren't worth your time to be honest, but if there is one that is, it is probably my one called "Raft of problems"...from what you said on my other poem, I think you could relate to it.

And as a bonus, it's short! Thanks again.

Thanks for commenting on my poems...Yours are all great 5/5 for this one cause it is so true