All hidden behind a mask....

by Kiki   Mar 26, 2005


Hidden behind a mask, a face so reveling.
One that shows all the feelings.
The face of a lover, one that wants to be a lovey.
The eyes of the face stare out, to look at the one the face craves.
The cheeks of the face become red when the the love is close.
The lips of the face desire the lips of another.
The nose of the face smells the sweet mist of the it's love.
Yet all this is hidden behind a make. A mask that isn't willing to come off.

Let me know what you think vote or leave me something. Thank you very much!

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by brin macnamara

    Thats it. Secret love is a mask that will not come off, you highlight the suffering of secret love so well in this poem. 5++++

  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    i've noticed youve added a few 'the's when there shouldnt be any... or is that part of the poem? hmm... oh well. it had great meaning to it, and i can totally relate to it. 4/5
    p.s- please rate mine

  • 19 years ago

    by Aubrey

    amazing!! great job, flowes nicely!! check mine out sometime, keep up the great work!!!<3

    xoxo
    Aubs