Very nice. Great one... I tried to sing it... lol. Beautiful

amazing song.deep, almost made me cry and that was just reading it. imagine if i heard someone sing it... great writting. 5

~!~Noelle~!~

wow this song/poem was completely amazing. it was nice how u pulled it all together did u write this urself? if so good job. i love ur work. 5/5

thats really wonderful. id love to hear this one to music too. its really really good.5/5
~Freak~