"Unshed tears lived in the girl´s broken heart. " - I don't think the apostrophe in 'girls' is supposed to be there. You are only talking about one girl, not plurals.

Aside from that the content was good, saddening that silence can be peoples undoing. Well done!

^^Kalah.

very sad but I loved it.. 5/5! please check out my poems.. thanks

Awwww this is really good and so0 sweet. 5/5 Thanx for the comment!

much love
savannah

good poem- really meaningful and emotional!

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

GREAT POEM

Hey nice poem! I think you have your own special talent just like most on here! :)

Very well written, good job. 5/5

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Very emotional and different! Good job! Take Care! Brooke

This is so sad and yet so beautiful hun! Keep up the great work, ur a great writer!
love alwayz....
Haily
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This was a good poem at first it was alittle hard to keep up with but it was done well. A perfect exsample of Day Rape I had ever seen keep up ther writing...