Comments : Morning (2 of 2)

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    I had to delete the others, these were comments from before I deleted on the same poem:

    Ashley ( C ) at 2005-03-28

    Wow.. Amazing..So good!! Keep writing.. 5/5

    sweetenigma ( F C ) at 2005-03-28

    yeah no doubt about it...thats hot!!

    Writers Block ( F C ) at 2005-03-28

    I thought both were great! 5/5 Sounds like an awesome time! Mix your story with mine and we would have a blast! LOL

    XOXOXO
    Writers Block!

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel Fink

    Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob

    very good. reminds me of some of my own times with my girl

  • 18 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    It's hard to twine romance and (extremely) strong sexuality together, but methinks you managed quite excellently. My compliments, Kaitlin.

  • 18 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    It's hard to twine romance and (extremely) strong sexuality together, but methinks you managed quite excellently. My compliments, Kaitlin.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse

    Wow again.....I don't know what to say. So much passion in this and yet so sensual at the same time. For example, love the lines:

    "I close my eyes and feel your fullness,
    Filling my void."

    Seeing the double meaning of those two lines. One being the sexuality of it and the other being the void filled with love. Make more like this one.

    Take Care,

    Jesse

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet

    N i also liked part 2