this is good too, maybe you could make it longer though? just a thought...keep it up
xxxChristinaxxx

Wow, in my opinion this one seems really to be from the heart and it was touching in some ways. Very nice, keep on writing.
SatuzKa
p.s Could you please check out my poem Lady Isadora the Fair and see what you think, thanx.

Another great poem! I think I can relate to ur poems because we are older and have more experience with life another 5/5!

Brilliant! loved it!

Great.even though it's small,it says all it has to say in these few lines. very emotional, I really liked it!

Reaaly great poem, i can relate, i think i'm at a stage where i have no idea where i'm going, and everyone else seems like they do, it seems like life is passing me by, reaaly good poem, i really liked it, and i'll keep it in thought, good job

Aww I just loved this! It was short, sweet but held so much power and meaning. It flowed flawlessly and nothing seemed forced. Well done, I loved it lots *5/5*