I like that alot. I think it's sweet. Keep it up!

Great poem, plz, if you could, check out my new poem "Dear Diary". Plz rate and comment it, plz, i would really appreciate it it. I want people to understand the message I am trying to get through.

i thought this was a good poem, but you might want to try rhyming a little more , as far as differnet words go. the ending is much like the couple other poems i ahve read of yours, but still a nice poem overall...