Comments : Behind Her Eyes

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    ...omg, that poem is amazing. 5/5, can definately relate to that whole feeling.

    ~Darkness

  • This is a really good poem, i can relate to this totally.
    I like the wording you've used to emphasise certain points.
    Well Done !!
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    <3 Charli XxX

  • wow. i read it, and i felt like it was the story of my life... "this gothic lullaby chants to her."
    and the part about being "too scared to love" i mean, just amazing...

    i feel it

    <3 ash