I really liked the idea, very creative and there was something different in that poem from many other poems I've read, which made it very well written. Keep on writing, nice write.
SatuzKa

Another good poem I can relate to this one! I only found one thing and it's "for the good times we've had" U have go instead of good. Love ur poems! I am going to go read more what I have read so far 5/5!

thaks hon ill fix that

Goo job i especially liked these two lines "The times we've shared are not all bad" and "For the good times we've had" keep it up
-Lady Jaz

Very well written! Thanks for all ur comments on my poems :)

Wow, really reminds me of my best friend, although she was never my over, i found my thoughts and feelings in your poem, i liked it. 5/5