Loved the last line....thought provoking! keep it up =) 5

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(¸.·´ (¸.·´`·-----~> God Bless
The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig

thanks a bunch =p lol ur rad !

good poem decent use of syllables
and very connectable meaning

all in all a decently good one

thanks for ur honesty

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