You capitalized all your "I's." I congratulate you for that.

Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

You will make it through....keep your head up....nice write.......5/5

This poem was good. It held emotion And I want to thank you for commenting on my poem, it means alot to me. Thanks again!

Much Love,
Jordan-Paige :-)