Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

Wow, you're writing is much skilled for your age...I'm deeply impressed, just one mistake I caught my dear, an honest one at that...stanza 2, line 3...there should be a space between in and sight ...however, still well done! I'm becoming a fan of your poetry thus far to what I have read!

Hmm just read the profile though , hmm =( really breaks my heart, I'm praying for you to get through and if you need a lil support, feel free to email me ReticentSoul@aol.com , I'm willing to listen if you need it!

Keep yourself alive, your poetry brings new essence to the world =)

Love Heather
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