excellent write!

this is a good poem... i like the topic and the ryme skeem is gud... keep up the good work and im hoping to hear more soon

sincerely,
Blackrose A.K.A. the beauty in death

wow your poem coudnt be any more true. I fully understand the message behind it and you got it across really well.

great poem! Take care.

perfect

Sooo true and i just loved it, it flowed so well and the words were perfect:)