amazing poem!

Again excellent job. I'm glad that you understood my poem but i hope it helped you to feel better knowing youre not alone :)

They want me to join them
It will only take on more slip

I think the "on" is meant to be "one." Why not make a happy ending for this story? hehe, i'm not much into sad endings. But i guess that's the point. The poem was interesting, keep writing.
Satuxxa

Excellent. Truly, I loved reading it.
~Freak~

i can relate to everything said here. very powerfully written. you are truly talented.
~Freak~

This was a good poem but leaved way too much to the imagination some people like to read things like this , however if I take the time to read another poet that poet better tell me everything for my time. It was good description but still left too much for for the imagination...

Hi kia

Firstly, thanks for the comment on my poem.
I have to say i really like this poem and don't agree with robert (above). I think the demons you describe are meant to be an enigma, to the reader and perhaps to the writer also. The reader can interpret the demons using their own experience, hence the poem becomes a shared psychological experience.
Personally, I prefer poems that allow me to imagine rather than have everything spelt out for me!!