Hey sorry if it doesn't make to much sence it's kinda all jumbled together just my emotions i guess lol so yea sorry if it's kinda out of order or whatever k but yea thanks for your comments in advance lol
Nate

OMG!!!!!!!dis poem i can so relate 2 aii seroiusly!i hope ur okai n hope u cheer up fanx 4 da comments on my new poem u no it realli means alot=) famx agen n gr8 poem
nyc 1
love u tonz
coddie

What ya mean it don't make sense? I understood it, it's sad. You don't deserve to be treated like that. Anyways, it was a great poem--5/5 and two thumbs up. ^_^
Love always,
Jaime

Really good poem, I'm sure alot of people can relate. No-one deserves to be treated like sh*t, U can do much better than her I'm sure.
Take care,
Shell

heya N8 i alreadi commented on dis poem but i jst wanna fank u 4 da new comment n fanx 4 da advise it reali means alot=)
luv u alwayz
coddie

This is a SUPER WONDERFUL POEM!!! i luuuuv it!!! *5* keep ut the fantastic work! (i'm sorry if this is a true story)

oh.... absolutely beautiful nate!! haha i really really really loved this one!!! gud job!!