Comments : My Broken Smile

  • 19 years ago

    by Caleb

    Not too bad.

  • 19 years ago

    by Katran

    beautiful poem. i loved it

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Great poem, I totally relate to it....I hate feeling this way, always have to be pretending to be HAPPY!!! Good poem, I really like it!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Beautiful poem and as you know i can relate........ Another amazing piece!!! Loved it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by L0KA

    Oh my god! I can really relate to this soo much! I also hate feeling this way that I just want to scream, but I can't. This is totally me. Wow, great job on the poem. I really luv'd this poem. Thanx for posting it! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    So many people (including me) do this every day, it can be so hard, but sometimes it is for the best :( great poem!
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  • 18 years ago

    by Rach

    wow! I loved your poem, and like many others I can totally relate. Keep it up!

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  • 18 years ago

    by morbid_tears

    Another great poem! 5/5

    ~*Amber*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! I Loved this peom! I can really relate to it more then you know! It's like when I was reading it, I was reading about my life! Awseome! Keep it up k! And if you get the chance, take a look at some of my poems and comment and vote! Thanks!
    *Lisa*