Oh my lord that was one of the most saddest poems that I have ever read... it all went so well together...That was so freakin amazing... Keep it up... Hope your ok with me putting you in my favorites...

x.shenaricken.x:
Well, I would send you a private message, but my computer has a virus and won't let me.
The idea? Well, it started out as a poem about a girl that was rejected, a "goth" basically. But then, I began watching the music video, "Helena" and saw the girl dancing ballet. And she was dead, so I wrote the poem about a dead ballerina.

WOW... WOW... Ballerinas are gonna scare me forever now. Either that or whenever I see one I'll grin and say I read a good poem about a dead one of you once. Sorry...one of my thoughts...it's amazing...and WOW again. Elle x

Da.mn!! Spooky and full of raw deep emotion... Loved it!! take care and keep your head up (always)... xx:

*> : PainOfOne

wow... deep poem:) loved it...

Omg...I cannot get enough of this poem...I soooooo love it....

Omg...I cannot get enough of this poem...I soooooo love it....

your a good writer keep up the good work i cnait wait to read more

Yet another well written and emotion filled piece of writing, on a complicated subject. It flowed nicely from one word to the next.

Keep Writing
Nici

PS I have commented on your three featured poems, if there is any other particular poem you would like me to read then please let me know.

Sad, but very well written!

Wow...very sad and depressing. I think I must add you to my favorites because you right so well.. I am glad I came to check out your poems and thank you for your comments on mine by the way. take care xxx

I love this one too! Great job! Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

o wow, that was great! I loved the imagery. thanks for the comment on my poem it meant a lot.
Take care,
Renee

i loved this so so so much keep up the great work
~Freak~

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that was great!! i'm going to get freaked out when i see ballerinas ... and i am one!!!!!