It's ok i loved it!..... did you read my new one? i forgot? Oh dear guess i really am off it today :(

5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Good poem! I liked the smooth rhyme scheme and how it flowed. Keep up the good work!
~Good Luck~
-Kate

aww i really like this poem but where it says "she haven't had" i believe it should be hasn't but I am not sure if you purposly wrote that word ... good day 2 u take a 5/5 for it was really nice
-Lady Jaz

Very well written (as always).
Nice one Sabrina

Love yaz -
>Kal.

I really enjoyed reading this. well done even if it was written awhile ago it is still good.

its very good... sorry Ive been away for a while so Ive only just got the chance to catch up on everyone :D well done

i know you said you think it's bad but i really liked it, well done

Hey, you......I like your style and honesty. Poetry is something good to come out of pain, I guess. Check my few poems out and feel free to comment.

This poem wasn't that bad, you just need to proofread it and fix spelling and grammatical errors. Maybe organize it into stanzas. I liked this poem alot.