wow that poem is awesome... and true for many people around this world... my sister-in-law's sister was murdered because she was leaving her boyfriend to go back to her child's father... awesome poem... very deep and emotional

OMG that was one of the best poems that I have read in a long long time! U are so talented! Such a sad poem and so very well written! Loved it! Take Care! Brooke

reads like a ballad very good poem

Great poem. It has a new kick to it; I haven't really read anything like this theme before.

Wonderfully imagined.

5/5.

That is so sad, but beautiful at the same time. You did a great job. Keep writing and take care.