This was okay, it didn't really stick out in that great of contrast to the hundreds of other poems about depression that I have read. To answer your question, you need to be on 5 peoples favorites list to get a pink f, 20 to get a blue f, and 50 to get a gold f. Keep writing!

strongly put, maybe extending it a little might help, but whats there is fantastic, shows youve really put thought into it, personally really liked it. keep it up :)

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that was awesome, i kno exactly where you're coming from. Keep it up gurlie!

wow this poems great.......i'll join u in the shadows....lol

it flowed nicely well written. keep it up!

take care

Returning the favor, its a really interesting peom its something i can really relate to...the first two lines of the first stanza are really great, thats where all my attention was drawn in. and from there on, it was like i was striving for the next line. and suprisingly, the whole poem was totaly excellent. the last stanza is really good by the way. :D

you did a really nice job on the last stanza, i think it works really well with the poem, and i brings out alot of the features of the poems personality. I really like it better then the pre-edited version, because the ending goes with it alot better then the last one did...

aww thanks for that ashley!!! yea i wanted to make it longer as someone suggested and felt last stanza needed to blend better. think its better than original but still struggles lol!
thanks again!
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I'll join you, cause I'm so tired of living my life in pain....This poem is really great and well written!!! 5 for sue =0)

that was great. this is the first time i've seen this poem, so i cant really say if its better than it was, but i bet it is. 5/5

always great when someone else is willing to enter he shadows, to help another get out. very well done.
tnx for commenting on mine.

wow... i'm speechless after this one. Simply stunning!! 5/5

I found this poem really good youv'e done a really good job thanks for the comments on mine 5/5 xxx

I thought it was really good! The last line isn't too bad......I didn't see the poem before so i don't know if it's any better lol