Live my life/Broken heart

by Whittney   Mar 31, 2005


Drowning in my tears
Catching my breath
Choking the life from my fears
Feel the pain
So deep inside
Listen to the heart
Remember from the start
Close your eyes
Start to pray
Let your feelings wash you away
Hold me tight
Pretend to care
Feel your heart start to tear
Shade the light
Give up the fight
Just play dead
Thoughts surround my head
Think of you
Cant go on
Life is like an unhappy song
Breath the pain
Taste the tears
See my fears
Take the jump
Hear the thump
Cold creeps through your bone
Feel the pain of sad and alone
Hear the break
Of a heart
The pain in side comes to start
Pretend not to care
Realize life's unfair
Take the chance
Learn to swear
Take revenge on those who care
Try to smile
And drop the knife
Then you can say
You've lived my life

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jessi

    I read a few of your peoms and voted them your r a great writer keep it up nice flow in them too.. Please check mine out too and comment.. But you have a gift for writing .. God Bless you Jessi

  • 15 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Wow, very emotional...
    great poem!
    xo

  • 18 years ago

    by scarsontheinside

    hey whittney that was great givin u random props well anyways thnx for commentin so umm eyah check out my new poem love for him ok thnx 5/5 keep it up i love it
    scars

  • 18 years ago

    by Paradise

    Hey Whittney, Thanks for checkin out my poem. I really appreciate the comment. I had to check out your work, and girl that was an understatement when you said you werent really good at writing. I feel every word you write. This is by far my favorite. You are very talented as well girl, This poem has great words, and I connect with it on so many levels....You are definetely on of my faves on this site girl.....Stay BLESSED

  • 18 years ago

    by ~ღ~ jeSSica ~ღ~

    very creative and thoguhtful! 25/5! great poem! =)

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