This is very nice I like it alot.. 5/5
but I just don't like one line.. the "as i cut 'more' deep"... but other than that its a total 5.. deep sad and very talented!!
:)

great poem

that was really good i could actul picture a person doin that keep up the great work

Wow. This poem is really good 5/5. I just hope that you feel better soon, things will get better. Keep smiling, Cat xXx

that was really good! take care!!!

that was really good! take care!!!

WOW.... this is excellent 5/5 I just hope that you feel better soon things will get better hang in there :)

hey, great poem! very impressive 5/5 this poem shows how i feel also... keep up the good work! and keep your head up high

Much love ~ Tina

that was a really good poem, i've been reading some of your poems and i'd have to say this one is my favorite. plz read and comment mine

hey hun *hugs*are you a cutter too? if you are i really know what you are going through and it sucks:( but this is an amasing poem keep it up *thumbs up*

x-xStephx-x