You did a really good job writing how you feel donw. I know this feeling your having.. but stay strong and try to make the best out of life thats what im doing. -Elissa

I love it jessica, best of love for you,

-peace and love 4ever

-david

I completely understand your poem keep strong girl. if you have time please look at mine.

Very well written! I am not a cutter so I can't say I can relate. But I hope u will stay strong! Exellent job on the poem good emotion! Check out some of mine if u would Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

oooooooooo i like it xxxxxxxxxx

i love it. keep writing

excellent poem, i really like this!!

another great poem keep it up ur in my favs xxxxx

This is a great poem. Only one suggestion, you could have kept the rhyme going throughout or just lost it all together, but that's all. But don't change it, it's still good. Keep it up!

Love,
Tiff

I love it too!! becareful..great poem

Unloved ♥

wow.. i loved it alot..a five out of five

When writting this poem, I had intentionally wanted it to rhyme, as you can see in the first few lines. Then I started putting reall emotion into it, and I watched it quickly spiraling out of my control. It turned into this. I never changed it because I love it. It represents me so well. Calm and in control at first, predictable, but then racing off into this mess that depression has dragged me into.

awesome poem... i'm sure there are alot out there that feel the same