Comments : Demon's light

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Amazing piece...Glad your back! I loved these lines:

    "my soul's windswept in timely sands."

    "Riddles pave this journey, fair,"

    The entire poem is breathtaking! Loved your attention to detail! Keep it up~Holly

  • 19 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    Rose. This one is near perfection
    Definitely 5outta5
    Thanks for your kind comments about my poems if people like them I don’t mind sharing.
    Dave.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Wow! very nice, It's short but I love it! very smart choice of words and this 1 flows great too! i think I'm adding you to my fav's list =) 5/5!