Great work, such a sad ending =( but a beautiful piece...keep it up -5
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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
<3--Shauns Forever--<3

This is a excellent poem

Thats a great poem..thats exactly whats goin on with me and my ex i love him so much but he just wants 2 be friends..and your a great writer..

wow this poem is amazing..great job im speehless

Huny amazing! you've truly carptured your emotions. I know what you're going through, Im going through the same thing, its hard I know, but I hope things get easier for you. Keep writing, you have a talent

xX MAZ Xx

aww that was really good! nice flow to it!
Check mine out sometime! Keep up the grreat work!!

xoxo
<3Aubs