I like this poem, but the "Metal and steel, Meet skin and bone," part was my favorite. Job well done, 4/5.

christa//no motiv?

hey this is kewl especially the last stanza had a lotta meaning good work

This could be a confusing poem i think. From different places... Like where did it take place. like what years? It sounds like early years, but written to flash back on the wars in iraq. I really liked it. And men and women who fight in the war would apreciate it. Good job!