amazing piece of literature, really well written and freely spoken. It is easy to see this was written with the purest of intentionss, within which your soul resides. Love is truth, and the truth will set you free; obviously your soul has been liberated through love. My only advice is in two places where the wording is somewhat awkward for someone like myself, who pays attention to detail. the wording in line two
"that feels your heart with desire"
i believe you meant to say "that **fills** your heart with desire"
also, line 12 needs similar help
"in tender affection ways"
once again i believe you were trying to say "in tender **affectionate** ways"
otherwise, a perfect poem, since nobody has the right to degrade such a magnificent display of splendor. hopefully you take constructive criticism well, and don't think I am putting your work down in any way. thoroughly enjoyable all in all, please continue to speak your mind, it appears to be a beautiful thing. thank you for your comment, and thank you for allowing me the privelage of reading such an awesome poem.

wow that was great!